SpyritusCZE

Your application has been

For the following reasons:

Ø  Your meta- and powergaming defintions are not quite what I’m looking for. You can read up on both of these terms here and here. Please use the information found on these pages to alter your definition.

Ø  Please make sure your character’s biography contains atleast two references to the server lore! You can find the lore right here on the wiki. In addition to adding two lore references to your application, please make it a bit longer. I want to see atleast one decently-sized paragraph of backstory on your app!

Ø  Your character description does not really bring much information to me in regards to your character. Please be more detailed (physicial traits, perhaps mental ones too).

Ø Your interesting facts are a bit vague, and do not really provide information on who your character is. Please come up with new ones, that are more detailed, and better describe your character. In addition to such, please also add atleast one weakness to them.

Ø Although Théodred is a valid roleplay name, the fact one of your interesting facts mentions Rohan, I am assuming you took this character from Lord Of The Rings. Please do not pick a character from a difference universe, as the server has its own setting and lore (which can be found in the above link I provided).

You may reapply immediately, but please take some time to fix all of the requested changes in the above list.
 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Rave_Cave_Marb#6279), my forum account, or on the server (marb121).

You are also encouraged to join our New Player discord, a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community.