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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is another word for roleplaying game, you will be acting like you are your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is like a style of interplay
    Status: Denied

I have come to this city to find a mentor for me to train with, do you know of anyone with mastery of the sword and bow?

Character Name: Cioran Acornrun
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: he is an average wood elf Hight, he has a blue eye on the left side and a dark purple on the right. he has a scar on his right arm. hair color is gray
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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