Stanchcactus168

Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

Definitions: Your definitions are both incorrect, and limited in detail. Please research online to get a better understanding, but please make sure to provide your definitions with your own wording.

Backstory: The backstory you have applied with needs some work - you've gone great with detail, however, the scenario where your character's parents were killed in your small childhood town is a common cliché that we always see. Please try to do something more original and creative. Please also be aware that 'Netherite' does not exist on our server. Your backstory shouldn't make your character someone who's been through a lifetime of experiences (i.e: many battles, accomplished great things), because these are things you should experience and feats you should accomplish once you're on the server roleplaying. Give your character humble origins, the simpler is usually the better.

Character Name: This name is not suitable for our server's theme - please make it something medieval/fantasy related. You cannot be an experiment as your first character.

Description/Character Skin: The skin you have provided is not suitable for our server's standards. Please find something more suitable to the medieval/fantasy genre. Feel free to refer to the link below for a selection of skins you could use:

Skin Archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/human-skins/male-skins?authuser=0

What does your character want to achieve? What drives them?: Another cliché. Please make your character's desires and wants something more personalised - a good idea is to make sure it's relevant to something in the backstory by linking them together.

Roleplay Scenario: You need a roleplay scenario. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

If there are any concerns or queries, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2021.