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Azren
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Dilliacupcake#4080
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: A good way I've avoided powergaming in roleplay is by creating a background and personality for my character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It can make another person feel cheated because whatever information that was inquired was inquired by unfair means.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"My story, huh? I should cut you down for asking such a question. However, I feel like sharing today. My story begins in a small village in the Kingdom of Haense. I don't remember much. My mother was a high elf and my father was a highlander. I don't remember much about who they were. When I was five, my village was burned to the ground by Orcs and all the children were rounded up and tossed in cages. All the adults, who didn't die in the fire, were brought before the cages and had their throats slit. My parents survived the fire. They didn't survive the knife. I watched them bleed out. I started screaming and yelling at the Orcs. They got annoyed and one of them slashed their knife across my face, giving me the scar I have now. The cages full of kids were loaded onto carts and dragged off. I was brought and sold to a High Elven village. The High Elf I was sold to was the chief of his village. He hated how impure my blood was. One day, when I was twelve, he decided I wasn't worthy of having elven ears and brought me before the village. He cut the tips of my ears off. He made me an example of why interbreeding wasn't tolerated and the consequences of defying that rule. When I was fourteen, the Chief had enough of me and gave me to slave traders. The slave traders were about to sell me to a tribe of Orcs when they were assassinated by an assassin from the assassins guild. She decided to take pity on me and gave me to the assassins guild to become one of them. And I did. For three years, I assassinated hundreds. When I was seventeen, the assassins guild I was part of got disbanded and I've been roaming ever since. That's it. That's my story."


Character Name: Azren Fen'ti
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Black hair, red eyes, is 6'2 feet tall, weighs 160 pounds, and is very lean. Wears an assassins outfit. Has scar down left eye.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Red eyes are not acceptable for your chosen race, Please replace the eye colour with one of the following Blue, grey, hazel, amber, brown, green

Your Character Biography features a common character trope such as the assassin background and painting orcs in a bad light! Please change that.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Smol_Bean~#2377! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Red eyes are not acceptable for your chosen race, Please replace the eye colour with one of the following Blue, grey, hazel, amber, brown, green

Your Character Biography features a common character trope such as the assassin background and painting orcs in a bad light! Please change that.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Smol_bean~#2377! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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