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Raoul

By Raoul

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: broke the roleplay mainly to do his/her own interest.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unrealistic action
    Status: Denied

Um,i just wanted to find a particular someone to teach me how to use magic.

Character Name: steven
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: big ,furry and red eyes.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

  • You have to make a Creature Application To play a kharajyr

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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