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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Alter your phrasing, to suggest an "attempt" of an attack

    use "gerry attempts to stab jason in the neck" instead of "gerry stabs jason in the neck"

    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using outside information can drastically change a roleplay scenerio, making a fight unfair, or changes a set of events to give one player certain unfair advantages
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Omaro takes a seat on the cushion "my story huh?" he says with a sigh "its a simple one, and complex at the same time. it all started when I was 19, I grew up learning about my ancestors from my parents, my dad especially. He would always tell a story for dinner,  first it was iblees' War, then it was Veluluai's mandate. every night. I understand the importance of my ancestors. and slowly he would ask me to tell the stories, forcing me to read, hours and hours of my ancestors history, and i couldnt do it anymore i told him it was stupid! couldn't we get just ONE dinner without a 4 hour long history lesson?" he yawns "sorry.. just tired from all the walking. Anyways we fought about it a lot, and it ended with him kicking me out and here ive been.. wandering for the last couple years just surviving from place to place... just trying to find myself i guess" 


Character Name: Omaro Kaldrosash
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Omaro stands at 6'3, with a long flowy mohawk he is 22 years old, and has a claw scar on the right side of his face over his eye and a solid 230 lbs.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Your fourm username isn’t server appropriate. Please change it!

 

  • You have your Character Age to 18, yet you say his story starts at 19, please fix it!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

 

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