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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Meta and Power gaming definitions lack clarity. Please add an example for each of these.
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/
• In your Bio you need to fix the following errors
  • You can not have had your character have experience with either alchemy or magic. These skills must be aquired in role play
  • “Extra Terrestrial” Means aliens, not a higher power. Find a better word to use in this instance.
• In your Physical Description you state “Primarily grey” with no refrence as to what this is. Fix this
• In your Personality traits you state your character is “Sociopathic”, and intend to use this as a negative trait. This is a mental disorder, and is not what we are looking for as a negative trait. This negative trait would most likely only affect the people around you, and not yourself. Also, implying a mental disorder is inherently negative isn’t cool.
• In your Roleplay scenario you use “I” in your actions instead of “He/him/his”. Please correct this, as this is the standard usage in roleplay on the server.
• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
• https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/