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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

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• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character Biography states that your character was raised by a druid. Please change that!

• Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Wood Elves have darker hair! The lightest I would suggest is a brown. 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

• Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin! I suggest using the skin you've linked in your Roleplay Response.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

     

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Melpomenne. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at minty#8400

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why you’ve been denied. 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.