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The_bowlingsheep

By The_bowlingsheep

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming often also to simply as 'Meta' is the use of information aquired out-of-characters in-characters
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it is when you do unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

"im here for a fresh start  and for some fresh start and to have rights and i will do anything to get them."  i want to find to find a good job and find money and i will do any job to get that anything. as he look at the expensive jewelry on people neck as he thought about all the money he could have but i need to  have a good life he thought no more more stealing

Character Name: Kameron Sudarshan
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: tall and strong two eyes and look like a sheep
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are plagiarized from the Wiki.

  • Your Character Biography states ‘pvp’. This term, or mechanic, does not exist within roleplay. 

  • Your Character Biography states that your character is a sheep. You cannot roleplay an animal, only the five descendant races which are; Human, Elf (High Elf, Dark Elf, Wood Elf), Dwarf (Cave Dwarf, Forest Dwarf, Mountain Dwarf), Orc (Uruk, Goblin), and Halfling.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking!

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as it is that of a sheep. Please fix this accordingly!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the WIKI !

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