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TheBadZog

By TheBadZog

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: KingZog#3073
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Talking about something that is not within the timeline of the roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Being as powerful as possible usually breaking the detriments of the Roleplay
    Status: Denied

“Nothing, Just a traveling person looking at different places. Now leave me.”

Character Name: Rian Lozek
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Very bland looking jacket and shoes, green eye color, Black hair color, Slimish, 5'9, 170lbs, Brown skin tone.
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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