TheDiam0ndKing

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/