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TurcHompt

By TurcHompt

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: RRedscare#4934
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you force knowledge into your character without him or her knowing or experiencing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unfair actions, like Joan flawlessly cut the serpents head off with no hesitation with a flick of a fingure
    Status: Denied

“YOUR SPINE ELF!” He yelled to the merchant, Turc rams the merchant into the wall and strike with his axe, he turns and runs out of the bazaar blowing a horn signaling other orcs to join, they pillaged and torched the wooden buildings and made the bazaar red, “ A better look.” he said to himself, Turc and the orcs left the raided plaza and sounded the horn then yelled, “ WE’LL BE BACK!” yelling to the survivors that were hiding. they left to camp with goods food meat and booze and had a feast after that exciting raid.

Character Name: Turc The Hornblower
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: 7'2ft muscular big set broad shouldered black hair that is tied back teeth poke from his mouth yellow eyes and green skin and carries a horn, 273lbs
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your powergaming definition is to short
  • You cannot claim to be well know, having a small following on orc’s falls under this
  • If Turc is 23, he couldn’t have been about in 1705 as the rp year is 1778
  • Your apps bio has a lot of powergaming one examples is single-handedly killing a Greymane boar
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Greymane_Boar
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response needs a little work...
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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