TheOvergay

Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

•  Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

• Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race – dwarves cannot have purple eyes. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one dialogue and one action. 

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/