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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge the person controlling the character has to change events. Such as you reading something and then using it with your character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing a situation to play out the way you want.
    Status: Denied

Bernie replies " I was looking to explore this wide land and couldn't do that without coming here!"   

Character Name: Bernie Fernandez
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: 180 cm tall. 80kg. Brown hair.
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that they have a bounty on their head. this makes them 'well known' coming onto the server you can't claim Cannot claim to be royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy.

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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