Theworst1234

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but they need more detail. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography states that he has an older brother, please know that elves can only have one kid every 15 years. (I know you didn't give an age, but just wanted to let you know)
• Your whole village being burnt down and leaving you as the only living soul is a common character trope, please look at this link to know what to avoid.

1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

• Your Character Biography states that his and other families where hiding from the undead, there are many things that count as undead. However not many people know this knowledge so please state what kind of undead they are trying to fight... or remove it in place of something else (not trying to be mean/rude just need what's what <3)
• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.
• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

1.  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one! (If you need help please reach out so I can help!)

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

1. https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

You made a new app, there for the newest one will be looked at