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TJSpider12
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: don't use a definite outcome instead make it possible that whatever you are doing it may will fail
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it makes them know things that they should not know and gives the other players a disadvantage
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

"I was traveling across the Ocean I search for the island of Aveos" you say. then you see on the wall a map, a map of Aveos "wait this is Aegis I found it I have been looking for years". the hag gets up and gestors for you to follow her. you follow her and she shows you to a room with a be "sleep" she says you do as she says for tomorrow you will set out. tomorrow its time to leave you remember that you hade a bag on the beach that you landed on you head to the beach in search of the bag. at the beach you see the bag you run up to it in the bag is some food a book on magic a map and a sword "at lest its something" you say and you set out in search of a town to learn more... to be continued.


Character Name: silver moon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: green eyes; hair color brown; weight 80 pounds; height 4 foot 9; outfits green robs
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Aegis does not exist proactively at this time within the lore, please correct such

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- please make your roleplay sample more cohesive.

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- please make your roleplay sample more cohesive.

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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