TokyoJapanee

Hello there! At this time, your application has been placed on:

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. If you have any trouble in understanding and/or implementing these edits- please reach out and I can help!

You are still able to access the server (MC.LOTC.CO), and will be able to explore as a wandering soul. If you have any further questions, you are welcome to ask these within the [WS] chat, and a Community Member or a Server Player will respond accordingly. 

Before I can whitelist you, the following changes need to be made to your application:

A note: please revise the way in which your application has been written. As a roleplaying server, it is integral that LOTC players are able to have relatively good grammar and writing skills. You have capitalised every first letter of almost every word, and the lack of definitive sentences make your application hard to read. Please edit this.

• Your Biography must include lore from the server. Please use the links I've provided below to access our wiki. These can be places, events or cultures from LOTC lore.
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response just needs a few small tweaks. Be careful with divulging inner thought within your emote, as it is typical to only describe words and actions - what the other players may see your character doing and/or saying, rather than their inner thoughts. Here's an example scenario response I've written to the prompt supplied in the application:
  • Mary stepped off the boat, eagerly eyeing the world around her. She walked through the bustling markets, carefully manoeuvring in order to avoid the gaze of those merchants about. When the gentleman would approach her, she offered a timid smile in return. "I suppose - well, I suppose I'm not sure. Adventure calls me, and something inside of me prompted me to board that boat, and wind up here." She spoke earnestly.

Once you have corrected these issues, please message me here on the forums or through my discord: ivory#8860. I will review your application as soon as I am able to. 

If you cannot make the changes within 24 hours, please reach out to me on discord. Otherwise, your application will be denied. If this happens, you are always more than welcome to reapply at any time.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

• https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

• https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Still requiring edits:

A note: please revise the way in which your application has been written. As a roleplaying server, it is integral that LOTC players are able to have relatively good grammar and writing skills. You have capitalised every first letter of almost every word, and the lack of definitive sentences make your application hard to read. Please edit this.

• Your Biography must include lore from the server. Please use the links I've provided below to access our wiki. These can be places, events or cultures from LOTC lore.

Hello again! Unfortunately your application has been:

This is due to the 24 Hour time bracket expiring for changes to be made.

You are more than welcome to reapply at any time! Ensure that next time you apply my feedback into your application, and you’ll have no trouble getting accepted and whitelisted into LoTC!

Should you have any questions, please reach out to me on discord @ivory#8860, or ask questions within the [WS] chat on the server.

We hope to see you roleplaying soon :)