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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: jungkook#3220
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information gained from in/ out of character experiences
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing things on other players such as actions from a position of power
    Status: Denied

Stranger: “Welcome!” “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”

Floda: *would glance upwards and give a grunt* “I have come to spread the story of the oppressed”

Stranger: “Well then! Enjoy your stay, if there is anything I can do for you, please let me know!”

Floda: “I care not for the comforts of this Earth. Justice and freedom for the downtrodden is the only way true joy can be attained.”

Stranger: *would look down at Floda, expressing some disdain yet interest at the same time* “Well... as I said, enjoy your stay sir.”

Floda: *Grunts yet again and motions at boat ramp* “Thanks, let us go, Orgug. I must begin soon.”

Orgug (wife): “Yes dear” *would pick up Floda, carrying him down the paved street and pushing bystanders aside*

Character Name: Floda the Exuberant
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 256
Physical Description: An exceedingly disproportionate dwarf, standing at only 3 feet tall yet having a body the width of a oak barrel used for containing fine ale
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Amelica

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character grew to be a renowned philosopher. Your character cannot be renowned in any way prior to joining the server; all such recognition must be achieved through active roleplay on the server.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character grew up in Kal’Urguan. This is inconsistent with your character’s age; Kal’Urguan existed over 400 years ago in-game.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please find one that matches. Alternatively, you may correct your physical description so it matches the skin you use.

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Character Age is too old. You must play a character that’s under 100 years old. 

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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