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ToxicTuxa

By ToxicTuxa

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: ToxicTuxa #2205
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Influence of all factors that are not directly systematic, but still present
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing serious actions of another character without giving him evasiveness
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.     

 

 

"I'm here because I'm looking for someone," says the dwarf whose name is Tuxa and goes over the market with the trader. The trader asks "Who are you looking for, maybe I can help you". The dwarf renounces and goes on, because his intentions are secret and not too many should know. He walked through the streets of the city, past the market stalls, where many precious and beautiful jewels were offered for sale. Later, he went to a restaurant and asked the waitress what she had on the daily menu and ordered it. It was a soup with some vegetables, beef and noodles, but also a big jug of beer to drink was there. The dwarf stayed in the inn to continue his journey the next day.                

 

I have to apologize for the spelling mistakes  

 

Sincerely, Tuxa

Character Name: Tuxa
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 60
Physical Description: He is a strong dwarf with a strong will. He shows loyalty to his king and would die for his brothers in battle.
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Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • your Fear is a bit lacking. It should be at least two sentences in length and should provide a reason why they are scared of their fear. 

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

 

 

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed! 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI


 

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