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Eallanor

By Eallanor

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Toxik#3684
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: to act from real life to roleplaying. example, Luke's friend told Him that they are preparing for a raid so Luke prepare's his roleplaying character, Lucas to get ready for for a fight
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To act unreasonable or unfairly to do something not feasible for example, Having a way tp instantly kill your opponent without giving them a chance.
    Status: Denied

“O-Oh, I was looking for someone I know who has gone missing. I don’t suppose you’ve seen these people before.” Juel can already see the answer, so he frowns and trudges further down the bazaar. 

Character Name: Juel II
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: he is averagely strong but he is fairly agile. He is somewhat tall and thin. He Isn't very heavy so he can be pushed away by heavier people easily.
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LordScisso

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to lack of effort, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your meta and power gaming definitions, while correct could use some work. Use the following link to help assist you in rewriting it.
  • In your bio, you only have one lore reference. Please use the following link to help you locate another.
  • Also in your bio, you mention training to become a tough warrior. Please do things like this in character. Being instantly a very good warrior could be viewed as power gaming. Instead, try finding a way to state your character started learning how to become a fighter.
  • While Ellanor is an alright name, it is not one typical of male humans. It is alright if you keep it though.
  • In your physical description, you label your character as a “Jack of all trades.” This would be a personality trait
  • Your Role Play Scenario lacks any actions. Please rewrite it to include an action in your next application.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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