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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: FlameSwordGaming#0687
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using real world knowledge during roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making the character you choose super overpowered
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Response: I have no interest with small talk I have came to this city to find a long lost person who is dear to me. Unless you are going to help me find this person "shows description" then I have no further business talking with you. Now are you going to help me or should I take my leave and find someone else.

Character Name: Alexander
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: my character is 5'10 with brown hair and clothing from the people he has had to take from. Athletic and strong and weighs roughly 180pounds.
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ You mention Greek Mythology in your personality traits. In our lore, there are no Greeks, and thus no Greek Mythology. If you are interesting having your character follow a in game faith, read this:  

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Category:Religions_and_Faiths

 

→ You character needs to have a specific goal, not just a drive force for a goal!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

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