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By Gypse_Doll

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Stormi#4591
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Your characters use of re-life knowledge to the state of the game to determine their characters actions.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using gaming mechanics or any externam information to favor their own character or story
    Status: Denied

Once Andrea heard about her father being a bad man she ran from home and hopped on a ship and landed on a kingdome. Once she got out of the ship Andrea went exploring, after that she went to a market where tons and tons of people. their was this man who sold breads and flowers that noticed her and took pitty he asked “Hey it looks like you’re not from around her do you know where you’re going” and Andrea said “ Hello, I just got here I don’t really know where I am” and the man felt bad because she was wearing gross clothes and it wasent safe to be wondering at night alone so he said “Hey I know we just met but looking at you would you like to come work for me” and Andrea said “WOW!!! that would be amazing thankyou so much” after that she started working for him.

Character Name: Andrea Claire
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Andrea Claire is a pretty women her eyes are as blue as the sea and her hair is ginger. She's also slim and 5,6
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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response looks like an add-on to your character’s Biography. It’s just there so we know, you know what your doing.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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