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    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: -Karma-#8412
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Knowing something your character wouldn't know. You'd be meta gaming if your character understood everything that happened in a certain event, even though it just happened and he wasn't there.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Being to Op, Doing things that is beyond any normal skillset. Refusing to be realistic with the character.
    Status: Denied

 -I'd start to fidget with my hands nervously-

"H-h-hello s-sir" I'd say feeling awkward

-The man would begin speaking whole heartily- 

-Suddenly the man would sound muffled-

-I'd stare at his succulent eyeballs in fear-

-I'd then break down screaming-

-The Prestigious gentlemen would stare at me startled by the sudden scream-

-without another thought I'd run past him with tears slipping through my mask-

"Well nice to meet you too....." The Man murmured to himself, as I ran further away.

-after running for a solid minute I started to slow down into a walk-

“W-what was t-t-that….” I’d question myself

-I’d walk around the city seeing such dazzling shops from up to down-

-Vendors from all races try to grasp my attention-

 “N-no thanks” I’d say as nicely as I could

-After about an hour or so wondering I suddenly got pulled into a dark alley-

-startled I spun around to see three men wearing scarfs around the face-

“W-w-what d-do you n-need?” I’d say nervously

-The men would chuckle a little-

“Where’s the money” one of the men would say

-I’d look at them uncertain how to respond-

-with one quick motion I tackled one of the men to the ground-

-one of the two men would try to get me off him-

-the other man managed to grab my hand-

-while the other man would push me off him-

-with my free hand I grasped my short sword-

-mid-way from unsheathing the short sword one of the men uppercutted me-

-I’d stumble back stunned for a second-

-one of the men tried to punch me-

- I managed to dodge in time-

-using the motion from the dodge I drew my short sword-

-the other man tried to grab the hand that held my short sword-

-During his desperate lunge I sliced his hand off swiftly-

-The man staggered backwards swearing under his breath-

-the other two men back off as well-

“Enough of this!” I said surprisingly without a stutter

-within a few seconds the three men ran off leading a trail of blood behind-

-I stood there unraveling the event that just happened-

-I sheathed my short sword some time after and darted back to the marketplace-
 


Character Name: Hector D. Hyde
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Lean, Short Ginger hair, rich Jade eye's, horribly scared, about 6'7 ft. tall
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

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