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Vannessa Vampiro

By Vannessa Vampiro

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: its cool
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i love this type of gaming i feel like it is pr
    Status: Denied

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Character Name: Vanessa Vamprio
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: black haired red and black eyes and fangs and has a gothic look
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description states your persona has fangs, this does not match your character's race and goes against our current server lore, please change this! Here is a wiki page you can look at about dark elves and how they should look! 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks states your character has powers. This must be changed as it goes against our server rules and lore. Your character should have no knowledge of or how to use magic prior to joining the server and learning about it through Roleplay. 

  • You must include a response to what your character's biggest fear is and why, and it must be at least two sentences in length. 

  • You must include a response to what your character likes most about themselves and why, and it must be at least two sentences in length. 

  • You must include a response to what your character dislikes most about themselves and why, and it must be at least two sentences in length. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ audyush#7358 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message audyush to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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