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Verideth

Verideth

By Verideth

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Byron#1423
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using knowledge you know into your character's roleplay. Good example is knowing the name of the Elvin King's consort that you read off the wiki.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Min-Maxing every little bit to the point it sacrifices the role you are going to play or the lore of the world.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Lurikson will bow to the man, while sizing him up. Lurikson then says "Money is good, society is futile, all ends in decay"

Character Name: Lurikson Huangdi Shen Cao
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 37
Physical Description: Brown skinned, toned sleek runners build, short black hair and a piecing gaze.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Character Biography states that your character is a part of a preexisting family. Without permission from the family’s head, you can not claim to be a part of the family. Please remove this reference or ask for permission.

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions lore before your character was born. Our current continent is Almaris, and the Descendants have lived upon it for 47 in-game years. Read more about Almaris here.

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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