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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: You can avoid it by letting your opposing player respond instead of forcing their character into doing something.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by taking away necessary actions between the two players making the roleplay less real and personal.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

"Well, my sister and I have been traveling around for quite some time you see, about a year ago our father got horribly sick and unfortunately our care wasn't enough to help him and he ended up passing. Without our father, who is a wood elf, and without our mother, who is a high elf, which she died during childbirth, we had no one but each other." I shy a bit from the woman, still clearly upset about the death of my father, staring up at her I proceed, "I decided with my sister that we should go out and look for more opportunities, and luckily she was happy with joining me." A smile dawns my face as I think to my twin sister, Ariawyn. "We are just looking to find new opportunities and live life to the fullest." I grin wider.

Character Name: Marvia Ianthyra
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'2, 90 lbs, dark colored hair, almost black, and light grey eyes. Usually seen wearing all white.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states X person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

-When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

-Based on your character's lineage, you are neither a full Wood Elf nor High Elf, your character would be a half-breed whose race will be Elf.

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once the changes have been made then message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states X person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

-When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

 

-Based on your character's lineage, you are neither a full Wood Elf nor High Elf, your character would be a half-breed whose race will be Elf.


Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

If you need help or have any questions then feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt.

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

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