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Aelinor
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: vulture5
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By not making stuff up like claiming you did great feats which would normally be impossible
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It will spoil the other players with impossible to obtain information, similarly to powergaming.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

As I enter the tattered tent, the scent of decay and dampness assaults my senses. I pull back my hood, revealing a face marked by the passage of time and the weight of many burdens. Meeting the gaze of the old hag, I give a solemn nod before taking a seat on the offered cushion. "It seems my reputation precedes me," I say with a wry smile, acknowledging the hag's recognition. "I am Aelinor, a wanderer of realms both near and far. My path has taken me through dark forests, across stormy seas, and into the heart of forgotten ruins." Leaning forward slightly, I meet the hag's eyes, filled with a mixture of weariness and determination. "I have sought lost artifacts, unraveled ancient mysteries, and faced foes both mortal and supernatural. Yet, despite all I have seen and done, there are still shadows that haunt me." "My journey has brought me here, to this dim and murky town," I continue, the candlelight flickering ominously around us. "I seek answers, guidance perhaps, on the path that lies ahead. The threads of fate seem tangled, and I am in need of clarity." I pause, letting the weight of my words settle in the air between us. "Tell me, wise one," I finally ask, "what do your visions reveal? What whispers of destiny do you hear in the echoes of this swampy realm?"


Character Name: Aelinor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Medium height (175cm), medium built, cyan eyes, light brown hair colour, wearing white peasant shirt with a belt.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-Please reword some of the words and statement in your backstory, keep in mind that up till now you've been a background character. This means that you cannot be well-known, a noble, someone who knows how to use magic, etc. 

 

- When speaking of your character's action, please use 3rd person.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

-Please reword some of the words and statement in your backstory, keep in mind that up till now you've been a background character. This means that you cannot be well-known, a noble, someone who knows how to use magic, etc. 

 

- When speaking of your character's action, please use 3rd person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Kaptainscarlet If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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