Wacu0420

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Please try your best to avoid Clichés in your character’s backstory such as your character’s parents were murdered so they became bad. Unless they’re particularly developed, these tropes can be very bland and lead to boring roleplay.
• Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least two valid server Lore References in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Your character cannot be Mystical or magic in any form. Please change this.
• Your character Description is vague and needs more detail. Remember that this should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features.
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour.
• Please add a face to your character’s Skin because currently it makes your character appear supernatural or magical. If you’re having trouble editing your skin or finding a new one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
•  Your response to the Roleplay Scenario doesn’t make sense. You need to write a sentence or two that describes what your character would say and do in response to the roleplay scenario found underneath the field. If you’re struggling with this, feel free to contact me!

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

• Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes.
• Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
• Please try your best to avoid Clichés in your character’s backstory such as your character’s parents were murdered so they became bad. Unless they’re particularly developed, these tropes can be very bland and lead to boring roleplay.
• Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them.
• You must include at least two valid server Lore References in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki.
• Your character cannot be Mystical or magic in any form. Please change this.
• Your character Description is vague and needs more detail. Remember that this should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features. 
• You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour. 
• Please add a face to your character’s Skin because currently it makes your character appear supernatural or magical. If you’re having trouble editing your skin or finding a new one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
•  Your response to the Roleplay Scenario doesn’t make sense. You need to write a sentence or two that describes what your character would say and do in response to the roleplay scenario found underneath the field. If you’re struggling with this, feel free to contact me!

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

You may reapply at any time.