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Dragon knight
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: a player's use of real-life knowledge concerning the state of the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: to aim at a goal
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario. I came here to explore and become wealth to help others in need


Character Name: Dragon
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: skinny strong half dragon half human
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ You cannot play a half-dragon half-human.

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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