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wheatlord21
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: by applying limits to my character by creating traumatic experiences which change the way they look at the world.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: by forming plotholes in your personal story and the stories of the wider world around you
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


'i must confess' i spoke confusedly 'i have absolutely no idea'

 

'now before you look at me with those small wrinkly eyes, no offence' i said swiftly' and shout at the top of your lungs "he's a madman".

 

'i reckon there was a reason i was brought to this absolute pigsty of a town' i look around with an air of sneering derision' and i owuld like you, you 'fair maiden' to help me figure out where i am and why i am here' 

 

'so what do you say!' i exclaimed' will you help little old me?'


Character Name: Drystan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: he is 5'11 and has a weight of around 75kg. he has dark brown hair and impossibly brown eyes. he wears a maroon jumper with a dark robe
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question. Here

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect. Here

- Please double check your formatting and grammar in your roleplay scenario 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 - How does it make the roleplay environment unfair? Please redo your metagaming question. Here

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect. Here

- Please double check your formatting and grammar in your roleplay scenario 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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