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Demon king

By Demon king

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Demon king#0910
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I think metagaming is really fun experiencing roleplay is amazing (I'm not very sure what it is but I think this is right)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I think it is good because if there were no limits to the combat it would be unfair
    Status: Denied

Hello I'm here to make allies and become the strongest ruler

Character Name: Demon king
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Red eyes and outside his eyes black has dark wings he has dark purple over his body grey hair tall his skin is grey short hair
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your character cannot have wings.

  • Your Skin and Physical Description do not match.

  • Your character cannot have that kind of story with fallen angels.

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your wanted achievements must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit lacking. You must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes, and at least one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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