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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ᵐØ𝔬𝒹𝔶𝐋Ꭵｍ𝐄#6959
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: For me, metagaming is basically gaining information from an outside source without knowing it yourself and not learning it by yourself.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: In my own words, powergaming means being unnaturally really strong or performing unrealistic moves, ignoring mental disabilities, or ignoring effects of anything, basically being immortal or godly.
    Status: Denied

Azhrina steps off the boat and looks around as she sees the people of all different races and the rushing water near her. She stares at the massive city in-front of her and sniffs the air as foreign smells enter her nose. Out of nowhere a well-dressed man approaches you with a wide smile saying, “Welcome!”. He continued and says “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?” Azhrina stares at the man whom continues smiling awkwardly and slowly says, “I’m here to find some Adventure, I’d like to see new things.” she said while the man continued oddly smiling at her, and she continued slowly feeling more uncomfortable the longer he smiled.

Character Name: Azhrina
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 51
Physical Description: She has golden-whitish hair, blue eyes, and a blue dress, she has a strong body build, 5'6, and she weighs 120. (All I can fit)
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Oriaros

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-> Your bio must be at least ten (10) sentences long, and provide two references to Lord of the Craft Lore, Here are some links to help establish references.

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas  

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

-> Your metagaming and power gaming definitions are on point but do keep in mind that it’s in the context of your character roleplaying and not you yourself. (This isn’t counted against you.)

 

 ->  It doesn’t seem you display proper usage of grammar to where your age becomes questionable but not so much where the possibility of English being your first language is ruled out. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

- https://app.grammarly.com/ 


 

-> I believe that you first read Snow Elven lore before realizing it was a culture under High Elven lore. It must be stated recently they were no longer considered their own race, but instead a culture. Where you are not wrong for your character to consider them another type of people, do know Snow Elves and High Elves are the same, but to refer to the High Elven wiki page as to properly size (in reference to height and weight) your character and work out a better backstory for your character.

 

-> High elves traditionally have slender body types, there’s a slight problem with you claiming your character has a strong build, moreso evident of you reviewing the Snow Elven culture page. I’ll provied a link to the High Elven wiki page below. 

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves 

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord  Sora#7125 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

 

 

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Oriaros

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

  • No attempts were made to  fix mistakes within the twenty-four hours given.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Sora#7125, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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