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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is your character using information they shouldn't know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is roleplaying something your character could not realistically do.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Angelo
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: He has brown skin many times can be grumpy, he is skillful with his sword but also with magic, he has black hair and has double personality,
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Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory. 

 

✦ You seem to have put your character's race as a dark elf, yet many if not all dark elves have a grey-dark looking skin. I'd recommend that you change the skin tone or switch it to something else until you have something more appropriate. You may also use one of our skin from the "Skin Archive" 

 

✦ Keep in mind that elves are not culturally adult until the age of 50 years old, you may change it to that to fit the elven culture a bit better unless you have something else planned out for your biography. 

 

✦ "but also with magic,"- Your character cannot start out with magic as it takes IC time to learn it. Either change this or remove it entirely from your "Character Description". 

 

 

Your application was good but good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

 

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any question.

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Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  
Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

 

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