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Flamehide27

By Flamehide27

    • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: BingoBango#9113
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of game information to your benifit ingame. For example, if you know someones backstory or what they do because they told you out of game, you wouldn't know it ingame. If you did then that would be metagaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Performing godly acts, for example acting unkillable or automatically saying something doesn't happen because you are strong. Even automatically saying you kill someone with just one swing even though they blocked or had a physical advantage.
    Status: Denied

I stepped off the boat semi slowly, taking in the scenary. After a bit of time, i walked toward the market area. Focused on how big the city was, not used to big cities since he ran way at a early age. Suddenly he was stopped by a quite dapper looking gentleman. "Uhm.. hi?" I said. "What brings me here? Uh i heard the food was nice. So wealth is a big one." I said looking at the man with an untrusting look on his face. Walking passed slowly not trying to be rude or awkward but obviously attempting to avoid any further conversation.

Character Name: Anubis yangar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: lighter skin, dark brown eyes however one is more greyer (he is blind in his right eye) , common attire: black and white light armor 5'7 height 155lbs
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Physical Description states that he has black and grey eyes. These eye colours aren’t found in Humans. Please change this!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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