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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.biz
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: to describe your real state while role playing
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unfair roleplaying
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

I came here for adventure and friendship, you seem nice do you know a good bar il pay you a drink.

Character Name: randil
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: randil has grayish brown hair, bleu eyes, he is strong and 195cm tall, 150 lbs, wears green clothes and has a scar at his left eye
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions lore from centuries ago in roleplay. Please us a more modern lore reference from a time when your character was alive! This link will help:

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions a common trope: parents being killed by Orcs. Please replace with something more unique, and preferably something that happened in our lore!

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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