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Yashinoki_11

By Yashinoki_11

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: yashinoki#0291
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of character knowledge in-character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using godly power and being unfair to other people
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

 

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Character Name: Isil
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Brown eyes, brown hair, green leaf-like clothes, 6 ft tall, 175 lbs, lightly muscular
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description, as the skin has blue eyes not brown eyes. Please fix this accordingly!

 

→ Your Skin is too reliant on noise shading! Please try to smooth it out!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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