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ZrappyZ

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using real-life knowledge to determine your characters action.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Interacting with games/game-like systems.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. I say " 'ello mate i've come for adventure but first I need supplies" I then buy a bunch of stuff.

Character Name: Ethan Valorum
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: has a big bushy beard, blue eyes, on the short side for a halfling and muscly
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audyush

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Likes and Dislikes Responses must be at least two sentences in length and include a reason why. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, and it must be written in third person. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

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