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Aerin
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Ivan III#9157
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using information the character would no know
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using unreasonable power
    Status: Denied

“Power” I say, “and pleasure.” I smirk at the man. “Where can i find them?” I walk past him towards the bazaar, being watchful of my surroundings. I can never be too careful in a new environment. 

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Character Name: Aerin Donathyfe
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: light blonde, brown eyes, lightly built with fair skin and slight freckles. 5' 5" 100 lbs White hood and robes. Agile
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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to mistakes in your application, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Neither your power gaming or meta gaming definitions are complete. Please use the following link to correct them on your next attempt.
  • In your bio, you state your elf is from Curon. Unfortunatly, in character, Curon has not been around for nearly seven years. Upon reapplying, keep this in mind.
  • Also in your bio, you state your character moves to Al-Faiz. Snow elves do not do incredibly well in warm climates, and Al-Faiz is located in Korvassa, the maps largest desert. Keep this in mind when reapplying.
  • In your Physical Description, you state your characters eyes are brown. Unfortunately, snow elves cannnot have brown eyes. Their eyes tend to be blue, purple, green or silver.
  • You lack any negative traits in your personality traits.
  • In your skin, I can’t really tell what your characters face looks like. Please work to either edit your skin, have a new one made, or find one in the Skin Archive.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @LordScisso#5640, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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