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nicoleo12312
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: nicoleo_
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Being realistic and by not trying to outdo others to an extreme exten while roleplaying.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Playing fair to the lore and keeping on track with what your character knows or doesnt know. No jumping the story with your character.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

 

" Hi ma'am , theres not really much to know. But if you insist , I was left alone by my parents at the age of 12. I can only think that i may ahve been a bit of a handful but I always thought I was reserved and quiet. After being abandoned I would roam the kingdoms and country sides trying to find shelter. I came across a shop that was like a general store in a small village. I went in to try and find a peice of bread or someting to try and get me by. The shop owner stopped me and asked me where my parents were. I then had to go on to tell him that I was left alone and had to figure out things on my own. Thats when i was offered with a place to stay and food as long as I help around the shop. I couldnt decline the offer , so I said yes. The shop was pretty small and almost everyone that came were regulars. After a week everyone basically knew who I was. I am now 19 and still work of the shop. He treats just as if I was his daughter. I still question where my parents are , maybe one day I'll came across them again. For now Im trying to fi9nd something else for myself. As you can see I'm a high elf. Im wanting to be a mage. Im hoping to come across someone that I can apprentice from and learn from. That is why I'm here ma'am. "
 


Character Name: Nicoline
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: My character is around 5'2. She has slightly longer than shoulder length hair that is a white color. She weights around 130 pounds. wears a dress
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!  Please make sure you write this in third person.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is notapan ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing!  Please make sure you write this in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  notapan ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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