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Tully

By Tully

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: tullyisterra
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By committing to lore and the rp duhh, we're here for the intricate world building/roleplay not griefing :/
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: By breaking the rules of their character lore and/or ruining the experience for others.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: (delete this) 

"Story, huh. Been a while since i had to think it through again but.. ill spare you the benefit of the doubt." I say as i continue on about my life, carefully eyeing the entirety of the ten and its openings. ".. hold it. Something's up with this place. I've been thinking about it since the moment i got here."-

As it continues into some generic Bethesda game side quest plotline

Character Name: Tully
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A younger looking man of average height weighing around 62 kgs with shaggy black hair, navy blue eyes, with a pricier more modern style outfit.
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MockingbirdArt

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

-Please add a bit more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

And change it to 3rd person.

-Your skin is too modern, please change this or feel free to use a skin from our Skin Archive



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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MockingbirdArt

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

-Please add a bit more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

And change it to 3rd person.

-Your skin is too modern, please change this or feel free to use a skin from our Skin Archive



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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