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Qizu

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  1. fqREFqDecurHZWEQXUVYs7OD6CoLcAGNxUYcfm-0EK_9oLSl-h39HEDG1nZ0xtFjRsAHy8R2BKEbt31mLCHOnzaC-jyQG4x2v5lGm4kjGwdJTJHXkP8lkXXA9jZRv9K7UpR7EQeb

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Please add a second sentence to your character's biggest fear.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario lacks the following:  Include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes, Include at least one action. Must be in third person.

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Qizu#5409 ]. If you see me around in game, you can also /message Qizu to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

     I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

  2. fqREFqDecurHZWEQXUVYs7OD6CoLcAGNxUYcfm-0EK_9oLSl-h39HEDG1nZ0xtFjRsAHy8R2BKEbt31mLCHOnzaC-jyQG4x2v5lGm4kjGwdJTJHXkP8lkXXA9jZRv9K7UpR7EQeb

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

     - Your definition of powergaming is incorrect. Please refer to the Metagaming & Powergaming Definition Page for help with understanding the meaning of both.
    - Please include a more in-depth description of your characters personality.

    - Make sure to include how your character developed their fear.
    - You must have a minimum of two sentences for your characters goals and dreams.

    - Your Roleplay Scenario must be put in third person, not first person.

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Qizu#5409 ]. If you see me around in game, you can also /message Qizu to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

     I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

    For more relevant information or insights make sure to check out the
    New Player Hub!

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