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Ttsim

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

    To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Please can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

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    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Tsim#1832]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Ttsim to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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  2. Changed Status to Under Review

     

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

     

    • Your backstory contains multiple grammatical errors, please fix these.

    • Your roleplay scenario shows multiple moments when your character thinks aloud, aka, their emotes tell what they’re thinking. This is considered bad roleplay, so instead of saying “he infers that the clothes could mean nobility or very wealthy” instead put “he’d scan the mans clothing from head to toe, his brow slightly raising as he does so.” as well as your final sentence needing closing quotation marks.

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Ttsim! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

     

    • Your powergaming definition has a small grammatical error, please fix ‘si’ to is.

    • Your character cannot have purple eyes, as it is not a physical trait found within humans. Please refer to the wiki for more info [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans#Physical_Attributes]

    • Your backstory must have at least two references to the lore, whether it be different cities or specific events that have taken place. For more info on these topics, search the wiki! [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page]

    • Your backstory needs to be longer, five sentences minimum.

    • Your backstory needs to have less grammatical errors, such as proper spacing, capitalization, and punctuation.

    • Your roleplay response must be at least 4 sentences long, and include one action, and once piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message Ttsim! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    • You did not change your characters age to 37 on your character information in the allotted time span.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ❤️

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Tsim#1832]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Ttsim to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

     

    • The first Voidal tear occurred on June 4th, which would make your RP character 37 IRP years old, you’ll have to either edit their age or change their year of birth.

    • Your skin is fine, however its eyes need changing/editing. Typically eyes are 2 pixels, the first is the iris (colored), and the other is the sclera (white), with eyebrows on the top (another 2 pixels). Check the skindex for more options/examples if need be! (https://www.minecraftskins.com/)

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message LotsOfMuffin! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ❤️

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

    • Sadly, your Bio doesn’t have any official lore references! To fix this, i’d suggest heading over to the wiki, and include at least one official reference, perhaps an orcish city due to your race? Or a major lore event! The wiki is a great place to look for resources, I’d suggest you look there! [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/]

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Tsim#1832]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message LotsOfMuffin to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!wFwG-GQTXZTK6IhMDEWd9s4vMXyXReIzyfE62H0LKPpGVlqNmxmEB9OASkpQVPRplXMUkP3yno8NSQIK6K9R60qNxGvxBYrz-5McchUDYylg8oUYHeBlM_K6RUcX9OyzoGMIg7Ne

     

    • Sadly, your Bio doesn’t have any official lore references! To fix this, i’d suggest heading over to the wiki, and include at least one official reference, perhaps an orcish city due to your race? Or a major lore event! The wiki is a great place to look for resources, I’d suggest you look there! [https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/]

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message LotsOfMuffin! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Tsim#1832

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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