Alrighty! I have changed the personality traits and added impulsiveness as one of the traits.
I have also modified the age of the character from 21 to 25 so that it’d better suit the altered backstory.
And what I modified in the backstory was:
Added details on how his Father had been unable to visit his mother for years due to being involved in the War of the Two Empires, and talking about how briefly after capturing the Reagent of the Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, he’d start visiting his mother again, ultimately ending up deciding to flee from his division and go AWOL to live with his wife and son.
And changed the fact that it was an Elven Sword to simply being his first sword, that being a normal sword.
Thanks for your time taken to read my application :).
Fabioped09
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Alrighty! I have changed the personality traits and added impulsiveness as one of the traits.
I have also modified the age of the character from 21 to 25 so that it’d better suit the altered backstory.
And what I modified in the backstory was:
Thanks for your time taken to read my application :).