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Thanos

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  1. Thanos

    Fabioped09

    Alrighty! I have changed the personality traits and added impulsiveness as one of the traits. I have also modified the age of the character from 21 to 25 so that it’d better suit the altered backstory. And what I modified in the backstory was: Added details on how his Father had been unable to visit his mother for years due to being involved in the War of the Two Empires, and talking about how briefly after capturing the Reagent of the Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska, he’d start visiting his mother again, ultimately ending up deciding to flee from his division and go AWOL to live with his wife and son. And changed the fact that it was an Elven Sword to simply being his first sword, that being a normal sword. Thanks for your time taken to read my application :).
  2. Thanos

    Fabioped09

    Whilst marching towards the market, being mesmerised by the incomprehensible beauty of the bazaar, almost being completely oblivious to folk in his vicinity, his eyes would drift towards the fashionable gentleman who stood before him upon hearing his voice, and having pondered the dispersed questions, he’d softly exclaim. “As much as I’d like to pick all of the above, adventure has always been my strongest incentive. But right now, right now at this very moment, I’m just looking for a starting point.” He’d begin surveying the the bazaar once more, and before the be-suited stranger had time to process a reply, he’d already strolled off into the distance, with a renovated sense of thrill and excitement, being prepared for the journey which lied ahead.
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