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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Your Character Biography states John Hawkins was born on April 8, 3003. This is an IRL date, LOTC has custom dates and times - please remove this from your biography.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks state John is a Christian. Christianity is not within the server Lore, please fix it accordingly. The closest thing being Canonism. (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Church_of_the_Canon)
- Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.
- Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
- Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time.
- Your Roleplay Definition is incorrect.
- Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!
- Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
- Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
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Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
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Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out?
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
- Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time.
- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
- Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
- Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
- Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!
- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.
- Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out?
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT monk come assist me starting out?
Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! :https://discord.gg/lotc
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!
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Changed Status to Pending