Melpomenne
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Also! : https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199348-story-update-the-racial-update/
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Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! An "indie style" is a bit too modern for the server. If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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You must acknowledge the server rules! You can find them here.
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You’re missing your Roleplaying definition. Please make sure you define it correctly!
Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
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If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above!Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
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If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help. Please do not forget to include at least one example.
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about your race! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Also! : https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199348-story-update-the-racial-update
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Personality Traits/Quirks
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this!
Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response must follow the given prompt. Please fix this!
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
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You must acknowledge the server rules! You can find them here.
Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography still mentions how your character wants to visit Aegis. That was our very first map and has been destroyed. I suggest using Almaris -- that's our current one. Please change this for next time!
Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response still isn't following the given prompt. Please fix this for next time!
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hey! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Also, you've mentioned Aegis! That was our very first map and has been destroyed. I suggest using Almaris -- that's our current one.
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! Your character a tad bit too tall for a high elf! They range from 5'0"-6'6" If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here you can find some more on High Elves: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves#Physical_Attributes
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Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response must follow the given prompt. Please fix this!
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
Once you’ve finished or if you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hey! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help. Please do not forget to include at least one example.
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! Dark elves skin tend to be shades of grey with only subtle tints of purple or blue. If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
Here is more about the race! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves#Skin_Coloration
Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response contains some outdated lore! Aegrothond is not around this map! I suggest taking a look at this for the current nations and settlements.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
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Once you’ve finished or if you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography uses a common character trope! (Family death by "ogres") Please change that.
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Your Character Biography sates something that does not exist on the server (ogres), instead we have races like Orcs! Please change that.
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about your race! :
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Also! : https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199348-story-update-the-racial-update/
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Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! (High Elves can not have black hair) If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Personality Traits/Quirks
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.
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Your Personality trait states something that is not on the server (ogres)! Please change that.
Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
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Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
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Here is more about the race you chose! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Here you can find some skins: https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home
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Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions
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Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! Please do not forget to include at least one example.
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description not in accordance with your race or lore! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. (Wood Elves boast a darker complexion!)
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Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
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Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
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Here is more about the race you chose! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Other
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
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Your Roleplay definition is incorrect. Please make sure you define it correctly and add some detail!
Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
Character Biography
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Character Biography uses a common character trope! Please change that.
Physical Description
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Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there.
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Here is more about your race! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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Personality Traits/Quirks
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Your Personality trait listing is too short and not descriptive! Please make sure it is two sentences long at least and are explained!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
Skin
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Other
Your Roleplay definition is incorrect. Please make sure you define it correctly!Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
»»————- ♡ ————-««
If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message minty_roses) !
Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!
♡
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gounicorn08
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Changed Status to Denied