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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

    • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

    • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

    • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking!

    • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

    • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, most people are afraid of the dark.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the WIKI !

     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography states that your character possesses a dim lineage to a draconic bloodline, this is not allowed! The appearance of the “Wise Dragon” must also be deleted because there cannot be any mentions of magical creatures such as Dragons or Drakes in your application. Please fix this accordingly!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

    Here’s the New Player hub!

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Regarding the rule you mentioned, it is no griefing or land scars period - regardless of wars!

     

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

    Here’s the New Player hub!

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 2665.png

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    As well, here is the link to the New Player Hub forum post.
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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

    To get started, I suggest doing the following command in-game; /creq Please can a CT monk come to assist me starting out?

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    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in-game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord.

    You can also use /creq in-game and I or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, for guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub!

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in the future!

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 2665.png

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    As well, here is the link to the New Player Hub forum post.
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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 2665.png

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    As well, here is the link to the New Player Hub forum post.
    2665.png

     

     

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Please select Rules to Yes to confirm that you agree with them. 

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

     

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  9. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Your Skin does not match your character’s race, as white hair and silver eyes are not inherent to the Wood Elven race. Please fix this accordingly!

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

    Here’s the New Player hub!

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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  10. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

    • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Skin has its head covered by a helmet, please try to provide a version without it!

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

    Here’s the New Player hub!

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

    • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's goal connects with their biography!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes and one action!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

    • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

    Here’s the New Player hub!

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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