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  1. MC Name:

             KKgame1

     

    Character's Name:

             Tra'ria

     

    Character's Age:

             46

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Wood elf

     

    Transformed form:

             Epiphyte

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A?

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A?

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    In brief,

    Epiphytes are the products of a seed or spore that, during a full moon, slipped from the realm of the fae and into our world, from there it will seek to grow and thrive in its new environment. However, the mortal world is a dangerous place, and to protect itself it will, once it has grown sufficiently, call out to any bearer of a greater soul it can find. Beckoning it closer and closer to itself so it can eventually link with the descendant, consuming its normal form and fully reconstructing it from its own form, eventually forming an Epiphyte.

     

    Once transformed, the newly born Epiphyte will do all it can in order to protect and nurture the fae plant.

     

    Additional notes:

    - Epiphytes go through the four seasons in a span of 10-50 OOC weeks, after the season of winter the Epiphyte will decay, only to be reborn from their fae plant.
      1. Spring - Right after a rebirth, spring is a time of confusion, visually their forms seem like still budding flowers.
      2. Summer - Usually, an Epiphyte will stay in the period of summer the longest. During this time, their bodies seem very vibrant and they will overall be in their best condition.
      3. Fall - During fall the epiphyte will begin to gracefully age, usually developing a few wrinkles here and there.
      4. Winter - During winter, the Epiphyte will seemingly begin to lightly wither, losing its leaves as its current life draws to a close, soon to be reborn.
    - Epiphytes, like their usual fey counterparts, despise Azul with a burning passion.
    - Being within the proximity of strong voidal energy will be extremely uncomfortable to painful for an Epiphyte.
    - They have a weakness to aurum weapons.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    The plant:

     

    Detailed in the forum post:

    The Epiphyte.

     

    Taking after her fey plant, Tra'ria has long hair made of leaves wich is crowned by a small white flower in her hair, the more unnatural part of her form is her mouth, wich has considerably enlargent and taken on a very bug-like form, the unusual shape hiding a plethora of sharp teeth. 

    (screenshot of the skin, much easier than an overly elaborate description: 5eYEWux.png )

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

  2. Spoiler

    People put music here I guess,

     

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    - The intruder -

     

    Below the pale moon's freezing gaze, hidden by layers upon layers of fog.
    The dim glow of dancing fireflies filled the gloomy forest with dazzling lights.
    Their source, a grown seed of the fae, one wich seemingly likened itself after the conjunction of a venus fly trap and a white rose,

    its snapping jaw crowning a collection of perfectly white petals, all held up by an amalgamation of thorned vines.

     

    - The Host -

     

    The rustling of the leaves and scuttling of small critters signified another presence, one of the descendant kind.
    A hunteress of the Mali'ame, stalking through the cold spring's night in search of any meal.
    Her last hunt had been sparse so she ventured further and further from her home, venturing deep into the thick jungle.

     

    - The Call -

    As the huntress stalked through the dense leaves of the jungle, an alluring melody crept into her ears,

    soon to notice the source of the incredible melody.

    Coiled around a large tree lay the intruding fae plant, its beckoning melody still drawing her closer, an effect only compounded by the display of unrivaled beauty that the many demifey fireflies were putting on.

    Soon enough, the plant's melody reached its crescendo, beckoning Tra'ria to lay down before it, to let herself be born anew in its service.
    And the huntress, unable to resist its call, followed suit, laying down before it as the fly trap's jaws opened wide, slowly drawing closer to the wood elf until... SLAM! The fly trap shut closed with her inside, soon to be devouered, soon the be reborn anew.

     

    Now time to write up the CA

  3. 11 minutes ago, Shiredom said:

    Yes, garlic does have a very strong smell, but that is smell, not hearing. Besides, garlic is already repulsive to the weaklings.

    I have read over corc lore and cannot find what "weaklings" you talk about. So please send it to me over discord DMs if I missed something.

     

    13 minutes ago, Shiredom said:

    If we were basing Corcurita's off of real life Romanian Folklore they likely would have already included the garlic issue, and along with a stake to the heart and silver. The more you base Vampyres in LOTC off of IRL Folklore the less original it gets. 

    If I was downright ripping it from the folklore, then I'd be a bit stronger against vampires than causing sensory overload. Though I will write an elaboration on how that affects hearing yes.
    Additionally, if you truly cared about originality, you'd obviously have a problem with the siliti clans being pretty obviously inspired by vampire: the masquerade, but that part of the lore worked fine and dandy.

    Now, I do not wish to clutter the comments with pointless arguments, if you have any more complains please write them out in one post so I can take them into consideration.

  4. 16 minutes ago, Shiredom said:

    What's the deal with the garlic?

    1. in real life, garlic has a very strong smell

     

    2. Vampires having a weakness to garlic have been included in vampire stories for god knows how long, I wanted to at least represent this in a minor way.

  5. 2 hours ago, satinkira said:

     

    I'm moreso worried about Corcitura suddenly emoting things akin to *uses heightened perception to spot where your armour was struck before, strikes critical weakpoint with great force to splinter through armour*

     

     

    I understand your worries so I have removed that flavor line, the main purpose of the boon stays the same without it.

     

    On another note, I see that there is some discontent with how easy it is to cure the corcituri, I have noted down your complains and will try to work something up for that in the background, though it will not be included in this amendment since I aim focus on Boon 1 for now.

  6. 28 minutes ago, Unwillingly said:

    for however long the siliti are in purgatory I fully support corcitura taking up the mantle of the scary vampire trope honestly. however it's also important to note that, to my recollection, the corcitura were distinctly written as a curse/infection, so whether or not they should even be stronger than they currently are is debtable. either way here's my feedback

    I think the first boon is pretty cool and could benefit from some more redlining that better defines the limits of this ability. can they hear through walls? can they hear a whispered conversation nearby? can they smell the blood of an opponent sneaking up behind them? etc. these questions are important to ask during lorewriting because if it's not written, somebody will find a way to powergame it. I think an ability like this is best utilized for flavor RP, such as the idea that corcitura can pick up on the most subtlest details of a person's complexion or disposition. maybe they notice if a person has recently been crying, can detect the scent of another corcitura they may have contacted, etc. things like that.

    second one however is just extremely OP and is better left to mechanics-based speed that can be tangibly measured and determined. any lore that allows for speed-based agility in combat leads to extremes where people literally dodge every single attack, no matter how impossible or unfeasible it is to dodge because "lore says I can," and corcitura are a rather unrestricted FA, so I'd sooner expect this to just lead to powergaming incidents en-masse and lead to the creature getting shelved

    1. For the first boon you perfectly caught my intention yes, it is mainly ment to serve as flavor, I'll expand the redlines and definitions when I wake up.

     

    2. Very fair. Though I still wish to implement this to some extent, for now it's been cut.

  7. In their current state, the strength of the Corcitură only differs very slightly from the descendants they hail from.

    In my opinion, this "weakness" hampers the Corcituri's abilities to perform as actual threats toward somewhat combat-ready descendants.

    I hope to make a Vampire more of a threat by adding two one passive boon to their kit.

     

    Before beginning, I'd like to also add:

    Due to the Siliti being shelved, the dichotomy between lesser vampires and greater vampires, which once perfectly justified the corcituri's weakness, no longer exists.

    Hence why I'm making this post.

     

    Additions:

     

     

    Boon 1:

    Enhanced Perception

    [Manifests at Tier 2 (4 OOC weeks after infection)]

    Spoiler

    As the influence of Eireamhan's cursed blood spreads through a fresh corcitură's veins, they will find their senses greatly enhanced.
     

    Beyond the darkvision that all their kind are privy to, they will be able to detect even very slight sensations, the kind that seems nigh unnoticeable to a normal descendant, at a glance. 

    Be that the metallic smell of an escaped victim's blood, the stench of a pursuer's sweat, or the slightest smell of poison in their drink.

    Beyond the realms of smell, they may hear the barely noticeable sound of crackling torches or the silent footsteps of an assassin, ready and primed to hunt the corcitură down.

    Corcituri of this stage may also be able to hear conversations they previously only heard as muffled mumblings.

     

    Due to the enhancement of their senses, very pungent smells may be very uncomfortable for a corcitură, possibly overwhelming their senses and making them blind to the more fine smells.

    Particularly the horrid smell of rotting corpses and the pungent smell of freshly cut garlic will completely overwhelm corcituri, almost entirely overloading their senses, reducing even their fine hearing and enhanced eyesight to that of a normal descendant.
    This, of course, also applies to deafeningly loud noises like explosions, those being downright painful to corcituri and possibly deafening them momentarily, if one is close enough to be affected by the noise.

    In addition, due to their more sensitive eyes, any blinding light, like the blinding flash that flash powder produces, may blind a corcitură for longer.

     

    Outside of combative use, this ability would also allow for Corcitură blacksmiths or artisans to make masterworks of their craft, being able to detect even the slightest flaw in a blade, cloth, or canvas.

     

    Mechanically:

     

    - Corcituri may listen in on #q conversations that they hear as *muffled*.

    [This may be done by having both sides of the conversation /msg their respective posts to the corc in question, or having the corc OOCly enter the room to listen in while IRPly standing outside the door.]

     

    Redlines:

    - This only slightly increases a vampire's perception, while giving them an advantage it does not allow them to perfectly spy on people from across a city.

    - If within 10 blocks of an explosion or a similarly deafening noise, the corcitura 

    - Corcituri may only listen in on #q coversations as long as they can see the "[Persona name]:*Muffled*" message.

    - The enhanced senses of a corcitura get completely nullified when within 6 blocks of either a rotting corpse or garlic.

    - Blinded corcituri stay blinded for 1 turn longer than normal.

    - While Corcituri may sense the presence of people on the other side of walls, this can only be done in an 8-block radius.

     

     

    Boon 2:

    Enhanced Agility.

    [Manifests at Tier 3 (12 OOC weeks after infection.]

    Spoiler

    Once the writhing curse within their blood takes complete hold of a descendant, they are afforded a mere fraction of the speed their greater siliti counterparts possess.

     

    Movements begin to feel easier to a bearer of the cursed blood, this allows them to greatly outmatch their normal descendant counterpart in direct speed.

    In addition to their increase in speed, their reaction times increase to suit the freshly matured coritură's newfound agility.

     

    This allows them to easily outmatch a single descendant in direct battle, making it much easier to block or avoid any incoming attacks while following up with a blindingly quick flurry of claw swipes.

    Even outside of the boon's use in close-quarters combat, the vampire might use their speed to avoid foes, quickly outrunning most who give chase.
    In very rare cases, curcituri might even be able to catch an arrow mid-air, though this is known to be a great feat, even amongst their cursed kind.

     

    Mechanically:

     

    - Within CRP, the corcitură may move 10 blocks instead of the usual 8.

     

    Redlines:

     

    - While this does increase their speed, this boon does not increase a corcitură's strength

    - Despite outmatching descendants in a 1 on 1 fight, corcituri will still find themselves struggling against groups of foes.

     

    [Cut, only left in the text to make comments make sense]

     

    Though I've run this through two seperate spelling checkers, english is not my first language, so there may still be some grammatical errors.

  8. "And so, another Liability falls into existence" The Vampyr spoke from within the confines of his study, having recently finished a "refreshing" meal "Pathetic you truly were, dear spawn, kind as pitiable as your own deserve not even the right to be fed on. May we see each other again, come nightfall."

  9. Within the confines of an underground study, a cold, vampiric, claw slid over the missive, belonging to one André.

    "Failure after failure, truly it was a mistake to place my trust in your potential." Spoke the monstrous being

    "My dearest former blood-kin, I will enjoy watching your veins run dry."

    [Ah-ah-ah stinky! No metagaming!]

  10. MC Name:

             KKgame1

     

    Character's Name:

             André

     

    Character's Age:

             ~23

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Corcitură

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             Capn_Avery

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Capn_Avery

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             I agree

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             I am aware

     

  11. A young fatherist picked up the missive, reading it with a chuckle "Starting to tear each other apart now? Well, its a surprise, but a welcome one to be sure" he remarked, throwing the news away for another to read.

  12. MC Name:

             KKgame1

     

    Character's Name:

             Zur'gug

     

    Character's Age:

             21

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             Olog

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             N/A

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Orcs tend to have higher brute strength than any other type of Descendant. However, there is always a bigger fish, and that bigger fish is the Olog.

    Standing at 8-10ft in Height and with the pure strength to make any Human, elf or dwarf cower, these hunks of pure muscle fall under the Orc race and are theorized to be the product of Trolls and Orcs mating, and as such the olog knows no equal.

    Except for their size, they usually have the same appearance as many orcs, skin colors range from green to brown or even red. Eye and Hair color wise they also mimic the Orcs, with the usual eye colors being brown, yellow, blue, and the likes, and hair color usually being black or brown.

    To counter all this strength they are quite slow and absolutely stupid.

    Being more instinct and emotion-driven these creatures tend to focus on the here and now, if an olog needs food he will eat. If he is cold he will get warm. And if his bloodlust has been building up, he looks for the nearest thing to bash.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    Zur'gug is a green-skinned Olog standing at a solid 9 feet tall and sporting 4 tusks.

    His 535-pound Mass is clothed in two steel-laden armbands and an equally reinforced belt with what is assumed to be either white fur or white cloth hanging off it.

    He sports a short black ponytail and Brown eyes.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

  13. MC Name:

             KKgame1

     

    Character's Name:

             Keith 'the jester' Undersinger

     

    Character's Age:

             90

     

    Character's Race:

             Human

     

    What magic(s) will you be learning?

             Housemagery

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Self teaching tome

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             No

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

  14. Minecraft IGN(s):

     

    KKgame1

     

    Discord:

     

    KingC#4254

     

    Ban Selection

     

    In-Game Ban

     

    Ban Reason

     

    Hacked Client + Mass Pugsy (will send screenchot via discord on demand)

     

    What circumstances led to this ban?

     

    I simply had no idea what to do, due to the slow decline of the Rustlers from a bandit group to a mercenary group, I was left without a purpose for my character in this Server.
    And due to that I eventually became inactive and wanted to quit the server. Combining that with some drama that was going on at the time made the server simply not fun anymore.

    So when a friend of mine said that he wanted to mass-pugsy I said that I'd join in. So we downloaded the Wurst client looked for a group of people, and killed as many as we could before we got frozen by a moderator.

     

    Are there aspects of the ban you agree and/or disagree with?

     

    I don't disagree with the ban at all, I broke the rules and I got banned. I am sorry for what I did, I thought short-sightedly and deeply regret it now.
    I will never do anything like this again as I had enough time to think it over and realize how childish i acted.

     

    What motivates you to return to LOTC?

     

    I enjoy the server when there is no drama and I still have some things to do, like building a casino or a bar over in Elysium.
    That and the money for books are the reasons why I became a bandit in the first place.

     

    Attach other relevant information.

     

    for any further questions simply DM me on my discord!
    English is hard

  15. Minecraft IGN(s):

     

    KKgame1

     

    Discord:

     

    KingC#4254

     

    Ban Selection

     

    In-Game Ban

     

    Ban Reason

     

    Mass-RDM using a Hacked Client. (it won't let me attach an image so I will DM it via discord on request)

     

    What circumstances led to this ban?

     

    I simply had no idea what to do, due to the slow decline of the Rustlers from a bandit group to a mercenary group, I was left without a purpose for my character in this Server.
    And due to that I eventually became inactive and wanted to quit the server. Combining that with the current drama which was people that we attacked taking things WAY too personal and seeking us out to insult us in OOC and even discord servers which had nothing to do with LOTC just solidified my decision.

    So when a friend of mine from the rustlers came to me with the offer of "going out with a bang" I had no reason to decline and so we got the wurst client and searched for the next best group of people to massacre.

     

    Are there aspects of the ban you agree and/or disagree with?

     

    While I agree with the ban itself I disagree with keeping me banned as I believe I have waited out my sentence at this point.

     

    What motivates you to return to LOTC?

     

    No 'MCRP' server even compares to LOTC, and trust me I went through a lot of servers. And I regret doing what I did, honestly I miss the quality of roleplay only LOTC can offer.

     

    Attach other relevant information.

     

    in all honesty, if I was just going to RDM again why would I come back for the fourth time ~11 months after I was banned?

     

    I am not a man of many words but I hope this suffices to make clear how much I miss LOTC.

  16. Minecraft IGN(s):

     

    KKgame1

     

    Discord:

     

    KingC#4254

     

    Ban Selection

     

    In-Game Ban

     

    Ban Reason

     

    Mass-RDM using a Hacked Client. (it wont let me attach an image so i will DM it via discord on request)

     

    What circumstances led to this ban?

     

    I got tired of the constant drama by some sore losers and was ready to leave like a normal person, all I did was be inactive and help my rustler buddies in raids and general tomfoolery.
    when after a Talon's Port raid I started getting insults DMed to me over discord, despite how this may seem it is normal for PVPers to get sore losers in their DMs so I made a few jokes about it and brushed it off as a one-time occurrence like the many before. But it was not a one-time occurrence, they kept pestering me over the following weeks and even sent me the IP of the VPN I use
    ( it is not much but the fact that they got the VPNs IP means they tried to get mine).
    So when a Rustler friend of mine told me that he wanted to RDM some people. I saw a way to get them to stop by simply saying "I've been banned bro" to them, and it worked.

     

    Are there aspects of the ban you agree and/or disagree with?

     

    While the Mass RDM and Hacked Client part are true I disagree with keeping me banned after the fact as I simply used the ban as a means to an End.

     

    What motivates you to return to LOTC?

     

    I love this server, there are none like it. It has the best lore in the entire genre of Minecraft RP servers.
    That and 8 Months should be enough time for them to forget don't you think?

     

    Attach other relevant information.

     

    To answer two questions I know you will ask:

    - "Why didn't you block them?" I did, they came back with more and more alt accounts
    - "Why did you not report them?" I do not trust moderators on any servers, I tried reporting people on similar servers for similar things but 7 out of 9 times I got banned instead because they cried about
    cyberbullying so do excuse my distrust.

    If you Have any other question feel free to ask ahead in my DMs

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