TheShinyHodzic

MC Name:

         TheShinyHodzic

Character's Name:

         Schaeffer von Haas

Character's Age:

         35

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Alchemy

Teacher's MC Name:

         Shadow__2k

Teacher's RP Name:

         Robert Stroheim

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         Yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         yes

Schaeffer would be walking home, passing by the galken banner on his right before entering his home before speaking aloud "Vov, never really knew ze man but by gott he vas ze funniest galken I knew, even topping Mattia."

+1 Cuz its Acronius, why not

Bannermen of the Haverlocks, Aleksandr of Talentine, looking at the missive with his lord. "Da, My lord." he said swiftly before running off to rally his fellow bannermen

Sindrio Adalsteinn looks upon the missive then looks down to kick the snow Infront of his boots

Aleksandr read the missive and nodded his head "Might as-well go"

Fabula honoris et mendacii

Within the confines of the Vlasto villa, Leonardo takes a seat and starts reviewing his journal. He flips back to the first entry and reads, "13th of Sun’s Smile, Year 140. Today I equipped my Ma. . ." Upset that he couldn't fix his past, he stopped abruptly. Leo threw his Journal against the wall and started pacing the room, memories of his frater Tullius, late friend Marcus, and young Lucius haunting him.

As Leo peered out at the Vrbe, he found himself unable to escape the weight of his past. Troubled, he made his way to Tullius' room and began to write a note: "Frater, Praeteritum ferre non possum. accipere locum praetoris et abdicare se non recuso, nec frater sum nec pater." Pinning the note to the door, he left for the tavern to drown his sorrows in a bottle of wine.

A yawn escaped him as he popped the bottle open and took a sip. The wine cleared his mind, and he was once again alone with his thoughts. Reflecting on his past, Leonardo made his way to the Curia leaving his journal on his brother's seat as a last feat of honesty to his family.

Leo called for his horse and made his way down south, finding his way to Haelunor. Leo dismounted from his horse and removed its saddle, letting it free. Before stepping onto the bridge connecting to Haelunor, he took one last large swig of the bottle before throwing it onto the ground.

As he found his way further down the bridge, Leo peered over the edge, memories flooding back. He started to tighten down his Lorica Segmentata. Leonardo climbed up onto the railing, his mind flashing with images of the past. Turning around, he whispered, “Mendaces non habent honorem.” With that, he jumped off the edge, facing the night sky. His body spread out, waiting for the water to hit him and slowly take him underneath the surface. A few bubbles rose to the surface, but no struggle was seen. The body of Leonardo stayed beneath the surface, departed from life.

Leonardo Would say "Mors tandem captus est"

TheShinyHodzic

Leonardo Vlastoi Lepidus 

#81156

Leonardo would cast his vote

On 2/17/2023 at 7:38 AM, NightcastorKitty said:

@TheShinyHodzic In the briefly explain the lore behind the creature section, that is where you describe the creature you wish to play, including abilities, weaknesses, what it could change into, mentalities/physical traits, etc etc. A general summary. Your specific char's story goes in the section below that under the aesthetics question. You will also need to edit your Title to reflect the correct creature you wish to play. Which would be a Revenant. 

Thanks for the help, Never made a creature before and I am assuming that I might of missed something that I I'm just not seeing please tell me.

11 minutes ago, MeteorDragon said:

Haunts arent really a CA, tho they are an ability that Poltergeists have. I recommend reading through this

 

Thanks for the help, I looked at another form and didn't notice it was outdated 

MC Name:

         TheShinyHodzic

Character's Name:

         Ludwig von Bardenwig

Character's Age:

         44

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Human

Transformed form:

         Revenant

Creator's MC Name:

         TheShinyHodzic

Creator's RP Name:

         Ludwig von Bardenwig The Revenant

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

Phantoms are spectral beings composed of ectoplasm, and those who refuse to move on to a final resting place become Revenants in the Elysian Wastes. Revenants' physical form may change in transparency, reflecting their living body and the way they died. Their mental state is delicate and they suffer from confusion, frustration, anger, or sadness as they try to accept their fate. They are vulnerable and can be damaged by voidal magic, aurum, sunlight, and other things.

Once a Revenant has discovered their fate, they can progress to either a Poltergeist or a Specter. Poltergeists are Revenants who have not accepted their death and have become unstable, aggressive, and dangerous. They have gruesome appearances and are covered in rage, sadness, and grief. They have the least response to pain, but can manipulate the physical realm and create haunts. Specters, on the other hand, have accepted their passing to an extent and are peaceful phantoms with no marks of their death. They are self-aware of their new life and kind, but still experience sadness. They can react to pain and violence and have similar abilities to Poltergeists, but are more clarified in combat.

Revenants are freshly awoken phantoms who look like their mortal selves, but their cause of death is show on their body. They have weak grasps and can affect the mortal plane very little. They suffer from depression, anxiety, and other mental disorders, but upon discovering their death and performing geistreach upon mortals, they can progress to either a Poltergeist or a Specter. Poltergeists are unstable and have fallen into mental illness, while Specters have accepted their passing to an extent and are peaceful.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

Ludwig is giddy with excitement 

Ludwig Von Bardenwig would cast his vote