TrisTheWarrior

Fenrir, proceeded to blink on the side! Tilting his head. ". . . I mean, the words are not leas. - Truly they are attempting to become an andsaca of the green theow. . . I mean mages. . ." He commented, peppering in his old words, quite fond of them.

Yes but the redlines specify only magics mentioned above, as such I made them mentioned! Safety first

Purpose: Genuinely would be just cool to have, and give it a more stylish non-combative aspect to it rather than just void. - Taking you should be able to hinder all mana instead of just. . . Void mana! Go brrr! Additions are bold and underlines, and removals strikethrough Also my first actually proper written amendment I think! So FEEL FREE to contact me if you think any changes should be made. . . I want my ghostly bard. OLD: NEW:

Attacking WHILE charging. . . I dont think I want to see how strong that would be . . .

A poet rose his head at the sudden noise. - At the sudden notice of the Emperor's death. . . - His head tilted, almost contemplating his words, his thoughts. - Truly, he was not one to bother with complex things. - So, he did not care much. - The death of an emperor has yet to mean his home would return. - But yet, he is home. - And at least he knows this one will not fall. Perhaps if he knew of the Emperor's last words he would agree. - A peaceful life he did have, none has yet to slay him, none has yet to harm him for his pure reason of existence. - Nor did it interrupt his writing that much. - The only thing he hated was how the lands were displaced. - How people fell. . - Yet the future is like time. - A fearful snare. - A hungry maw. - And only time and future may tell what hides forth.

Current Lore: New Proposed Lore: Purpose:

Why the HELL would Bardmancy and Housemagic be together. . . In terms of stories you can tell? Go read enthralling story, T5 bardmancy. And see how many stories is equal to infinite.

Fenrir the bard was just SNEAKING under the table. - In his hand resided a Cerulite Curved Aurum dagger covered in dried blood! - . . . Pausing and placing it away the moment he noticed who his enemy was! "SHUT UP-! YOU SCARED THE HELL OUT OF ME!" He shouted! - Giving one loud huff. - Holding onto his head! "YOU CANT EVEN WEAR A METAL RING!" The boy spoke, one last time.

Not a Kani MA, but i've spent time around such casters. This seems like a blatant buff. And honestly. Kani might need it. Ive seen people struggle so hard to reach the 3 emote count to become agressive or well reach it. So lowering it, id say is worth it. Ive not read the other points as I have no experience with it. But I personally say to leave moon alone. It isnt weak, its a mage killer weak to melees. Sun is the opposite. And i personally find that idea good. As youve said, unattended they are busted. Lowering the emote count if say is enough to boost them a bit if their constantly targeted and not directly boost the side in which they are strong as hell if unattended in the midsts of combat. Edit: And i must agree. Harmonic is indeed the strongest of not one of the strongest out of combat healing spells.

Or just make it punishable by targeted hunting for an ooc year by every kingdom. Free corpses. +1

A bard looked upon the notice board, reading it. . . Before silently returning home. A certain individual would be able to hear something through the walls. @Customable "Roses are red. - Violets are Blue. - How much I wish. - To squeeze the air out of you. - For this very world. - For this very existence. - Would care not!" A pause continued. . . Before a huff came. "Thinking about it he would make great flesh for alchemy. . ."

And so, a bard awaited upon Cerulia's wall. - His own weapon leading towards the capture, towards the death of the very known Damien. . . - Was his name Damien? - At least, that's what most thought, and what he will believe from now into the future. - Yet, he waited and waited, but one thing he knew for sure. - The name, Damien, Vigil. - The rough description, it never returned. - For the name stood, to not be uttered by the real holder for the next years, perhaps thousands, perhaps. Never. - What an odd feeling. - Fenrir stood as the root cause of Damien's death, always being the core of his capture, both times. - Yet never the one to end his life. - But he knew it was a fact that did not make him innocent. "And so. - We look upon the lands once forgotten. - A thing of the old. - And the new. - Side by side. How odd this world must be. - How odd the very lives it holds. - A punishment. . . - The power of a scion. - Who knows its source. Yet with every power comes a price. - Perhaps, just a little. - Damien fell due to that very price. Perhaps, we will meet again. - One day. - Don't you think so?" The bard uttered in the dark night, standing upon the city's very wall. - Speaking in a whisper, as he rose his finger, along with his channelled mana. - The odd, ashy iron ingot holding Damien's face. . . - Bestow a spell upon it. - Never will it be the real one. - Yet even the dark, yet even the 'evil' deserve a grave. - A Rememberance. - If no one was going to give him one. - He was. - For in truth. - Now in death. - What is his soul? - But a lost being, through the stream?

Also for the [X Emotes] for spells and Rituals, is that Including connection? I cant tell.

Whoever clicked Bardmancy, is heavily underestimating us.

This one needs its fixing to 4 slot, The one above at the start does say 4 for wightdom! Also, is this MEANT to be peak Human Strength? Taking it would nerf Orcs that attempt to get Mysticism.

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ANOTHER THING IVE SPOTTED! - Apart from Truesight, I believe redlines and a proper definition Ritual should be established for Amputation. - I dont seem to be able to find its redlines, apart from the fact its a spectral arm and marked on one's MA. As such leaving it to interpretation, meaning one could say since it's ghostly it goes through them or can't hold items!

I believe teaching should also be taken into consideration. Four slots to even be able to get the TA feels remotely insane. 3 slots seems more do-able taking most non voidal magics are 2 slots. With void having its 2 slot options. Thinking for the future is righteous. But there should also be considered the magics path forward. I highly dont believe people will drop like 2 slots of magic to keep their TAs, most atleast. Plus if you leave it as open room. Thats not decided. There could never be something added. Or there could be. Its leaving it up to chance. Which i do not trust. Do not gamble kids.

Also this might need correction! I believe they mean An Amputated Mystic. Taking it sounds confusing.

I mean. Theyd likely just lower to t4 instead. Im more saying this cause teaching is 4 slot... which probably most wont have. 3 slot seems more seeable. Plus they have added a redline to wait 1 emote between disconnection and commection. Lowers using two magics anyway. Along with the non lich hex nerf that remains. No more scion with massive hexes and the such. My point stands more around the teaching and other parts. Cause I fully believe a few teachers, taking they were scarce anyway. Would not be able to teach anymore without amputating, which basically ousts you, and dropping 2 magic slots if they have them occupied. As such making Voidal feat mystics rarer. Hopefully.

I am writing this on my phone. Yes, it is grueling. - I am no mystic, but this is but an opinion. @Lenny For once. I believe T5 should remain at 2 slots. Why? Well, this would allow people to not need to downgrade in tiers in case of being a voidal scion and the such. Allowing them to maintain the 'builds' they have. This would also lower the Teaching Application slot requirement from 4 slots to 3. Taking Mysticism is already a scarce magic type. Now on the CA wightdom. Was old Wight a 5 slot? YES. Yes it was. But now that proper redlines have been established, I believe it can either remain, or be lowered at 4 slots. Why I think that change would be welcomed? - A scarce part of their identity before. Wether it be one slot of void, housemagery, or even 1 slot of Bardmancy! Note, I blame me writing this in the midst of class for any grammatical errors or idiotic idea. - Tris, The Bard. Yes, I am a peoples person.

Bro, i just woke. What happend. 😭

The Fox of Remembrance A lost child in a snowstorm. And so stood. - A fox made of an odd wood. - Pink of colour. - Its tail flickering in the air. - Looking with some odd, round eyes. - Sometimes empty. - Other times mimicking whatever the one staring seeks! - How cute it stood. . A flowing design of a Sakura tree moving down its body. - And right under its left paw. . - A mana seal, resembling a fox. - How beautiful it looked, glowing a light magenta when touched. The Broken Script Deep in its mind. - Memories bestowed. - Upon its very being. - Own them, it did not. - Hold them close. - It did. - Like a speck of ice. - Falling into the endless Abyss. . . - Just to melt. - For the world did not care. Chapter One: The flickering dream. - Too far to be touched. Long ago. - In the depths of the snow. - Stood a little fox. - A child at best. - As its eyes looked above to the sky. Long ago. - In the depths of the world. - Stood a grey fox. - An elder. - Some would say. - Staring down at its child. Its mouth open. - As it told the stories of old. - Stories of the ancient. - Once forgotten. - Tale or truth. - We never know. Its voice dreamed of freedom. - Freedom for its child. - So. - It gave a secret. - A secret to follow. And so the young listened. - Deeply and truthfully. - As it remembered. . . Yet time passed. - And the cold has reached the elder. - And the child remained. - Alone. - Forgotten. But his memories remain. - Carved into its mind. - As it grew older and older. - A blessing remembered. The blessing of the mimic. - To flicker your tail in the air. - To step on the ground with lightness. - To let them believe. - Believe what they wish. Chapter Two: TBD The Settled Stories Stories once told. - Once written in stone. - By who else by its own hand? - By who else but its own soul? - Some to be told. - Some to be preserved. - Remembered till the end of time. - Till the end of life arrived. - Or was bestowed upon its very writer. - For these. - Were simple trinkets. - For these. - Were simple memories. Chapter One: The lost. - Now bound to remain. - Now bound to reminiscence. Before time once was. - Before time once flickered forth. - There stood a man. A man with red hair. - Standing forward against what stood. - Standing forward against what was to come. Yet time is nothing. - Nothing but rot. Oblivion will take them all. - For he is None. None stepped forth. - In bloodshed and demise. For just over a shield. - For just over a piece of burning steel. All of them fell. - Children killed. - Mothers gone. - And soldiers fallen. So now he asks. - As he stands forth to the fox itself. - Why have a name? - If he fell and lost? Why bear meaning. - If he simply is no more? - If he is but a roaming graven in the depths? The fox shook its head. - And simply shrugged. What is life? - If not a road of meaning through it all? - What is death? - But a new beginning forth demise? And its words spoke. - And None nodded forth. For now it agreed. - That beyond demise. - Its story went on. - For None. - Was its name. For None. - Was now bound to the Fox. To roam till the end of time. REDLINES: [✓] [Magic Lore] Bardmancy - Lifelike Creation, Casted by Fenrir Maelstorm, Follows Redlines. [✓] [World Lore] - Haganeki 鋼木 - The Iron Sakura, Follows Redlines.

A young snow elven bard finally let his bow down, spear fallen as the enemy fled into the darkness of the caves. - And away from his home. - How amazing it truly was, the power of united people, standing against quite literally half the world. . . "Through Fire and Stone. - Through Steel and Smoke. Grab a spear and move. - For we fight for future! Grab a bow and shoot. - For we fight to prevail! May the arrow fall. - May the weapon pierce the flesh! Fight till you can't! - For the opportunity we take!" His voice yelled into the caverns as he connected to his magic. - The loudness of Bardmancy making it even louder without breaking the tune. - Amazing of a fight for sure!